All Comments on 'Hidden Talent Ch. 01'

It's so unusual to see a mind control story where the control does not operate like a light switch. This story works by giving the protagonist a bit of undefined "influence" without complete control. I hope it keeps going in this vein.

Moliere

The build up and sensations, the youthful inexperience, and not being sure how his influence works, makes this a very steamy story. Great work.

Made me want to read the next installment. Just subtle enough keep me reading with anticipation.