All Comments on 'Hidden Valley Pt. 06'

by RiteofSpring

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Cults

Turn-off. We just had a cult operating in Canada, the US, and Mexico that featured forced branding. Are you supporting that? That's what I thought about when I read your story. Not a turn-on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
This wasn't sexy at all

It was nothing but violence and hurting the woman. News flash: hurting a woman when she doesn't want it isn't sexy, your story is messed up.

AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Too much sharing of the women , you need to find something to write about, your a good writer but wonder if you so easily share your woman or if your woman so easily shares her self with others ,

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