All Comments on 'Hide and Seek Ch. 03'

This story gets more interesting with every chapter.

I'm so glad you didn't drop this story!!! It's getting really good!

I'm glad you came back to finish Hide and Seek. It's funny and very imaginative, but I find myself wondering why Jake can't tell Gabe apart from Nathan. I mean, it's only the glasses, the color and length of his hair and a pair of contact lenses. Basic facial structure, height and weight, the shape of his hands or mouth and tone of voice don't change. I guess I can only use my imagination and assume that Jake doesn't see Gabe in Nathan or vice versa because he doesn't want to.

I loved how Gabe is getting desperate to be known and told Jake to come find him.

Love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.