All Comments on 'High Card Game Night Pt. 01'

but since you are a newbie, I will be merciful. First of all, the story should have been placed in the gay male hub. Next, you must learn how to format the story properly. Little things like paragraphs and punctuation. Dialogue needs to be framed by quotation marks. I could go on. If you are serious about writing, then you should read some of the higher-scoring stories on this site and let those writing styles influence your future efforts. Above all, consider some editing assistance. This site has volunteer editors who can help aspiring writers such as yourself. I hope this helps and good luck! *

Keep going with your story. Don't be discouraged by the self proclaimed critics

Seems a bit sped up but please don't be discouraged