All Comments on 'High School Never Ends Ch. 03'

by Darkhime

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minxxxkittenminxxxkittenalmost 8 years ago
Wow!

That was amazing. I can't tell you much I love Dark High school romance, it's my favorite! Thank you so much, everything is perfect. I love how you still kept some reluctance in there, and didn't go full on "dick-dizzy". I don't really know what Daniel is in the story, I'm just assuming a "right hand man"? But I don't think Nick will share her, because of how possessive he is rn. OMG I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE

I love dark IR as well. I hope he continues to be dominant!

DeonadeeDeonadeealmost 8 years ago
Wow!!!

I was anxiously awaiting your next update. You wouldn't believe how excited I was to see chapter 3 post! I too love interracial non-con starring black women. The idea of a handsome, sexy, strong man seeking to physically dominating in order to satisfy us both... Umm, umm, umm.... I love reading about BWC's (Big White Cocks) too. Lol. Keep it up! Your writing is very entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Superb!

I have been reading thus site for about....4 years I think? And I'll tell ya I haven't come across a story this good in so long! It's so refreshing. Please continue, I beg of you!

Avidreader99Avidreader99almost 8 years ago
Please hurry with the next chapter I can't wait that long!!!

So incredibly good please hurry with all the chapters this is awesome I'm fiending like jodeci!! Awww yeaaahh OOhhhh yeaaaaaah LOL

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wow

I've re-read this chapter 2 times now. I can't wait for the next update!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Amazing

I cannot wait until the update!!!!!!!!

black_maestrablack_maestraalmost 8 years ago
This is good!

Plz let there be some karma! I love a dominant, alpha, and cocky guy, but what is equally sweet, is when they unexpectantly get emotionally knocked on their asses!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
This is good

This is so good. I really like it, but at the same time I want Skye to give him an ass whooping.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Finish

Please finish this. It is a work of art.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
update

Soon hopefully

MONKEYSLUT313MONKEYSLUT313almost 8 years ago

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASEEEEEEEWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!

DarkhimeDarkhimeover 7 years agoAuthor
Chapter 4

Thank you all so much for the positive reviews. Chapter 4 is being edited now and I hope to have it submitted today. This story has been a journey for me to get back into writing and the level of skill I had at one point. I appreciate everyone's patience and know I will complete this story and I have a sequel in mind.

Much love

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Skye and Nikolas

Loooooved the stories. I just hope Nikolas doesn't share Skye with his twin brother. I like that he seems possessive of her and I hope both characters continue to grow on each other

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I think you had an interesting dynamic going, but like so often happens, you introduced a third element (Daniel) to the mix. For me, this is going to ruin the story, but I'm sure it will enhance it for some others.

Oh well. Pretty decent writing, even if it doesn't seem like you go through and edit your things.

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literateabout 4 years ago
Yup, he's still a sociopath

Well written sociopath this guy takes the cake. Did he become such a dick from his power hungry father? If so, I feel sorry for Nick's mother having helped raise a miniature version of her husband. Run Skye! Run away fast, don't let Nick think he controls your life. Run girl, run. How many unlucky girls has this guy hurt. And in highschool gossip reigns supreme, you mean to tell me this guy doesn't have a reputation as being a creepy teenage mutant ninja rapist. FYI...Would do wonders if you proofread your chapters before submitting.

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