by tinypenisboy
Can we forget about the bee sting shit and just get to the point? What is stoning them and who is doing it?
I particularly enjoyed the previous comment.
I just read all 5 chapters and it was like reading the first one over and over again (with minor changes). I know you are trying to muster up suspense about who is doing this and why, but it just isn't interesting. The characters are very simplistic and the situations they find themselves in are too ridiculous to be believed. Nice try, but I don't think I'll be around to read another boring chapter. Sorry.
Roger.
I think it's good, I'm hooked. I do want to know who's doing it but it's hot for them to be forced to get together.
I know I'm reading this like 2 years after everyone else but still commenting. lol yay