All Comments on 'High Stakes, Hard Sell Ch. 03'

I love the chemistry between these too and that photo scene was so hot!

I want more!

One thing that's going on, that I'm sure you're doing on purpose, is having Jane react in the way of a manipulator to almost every piece of information. Everything she learns she's trying to use to her advantage, even when it's information that ought to strike an emtionally healthy person in a completely other way first, she is going right to "How can I use this?" On one hand, it is making it mildly difficult to like her as a protag because of this, but OTOH, I can see you sneaking in slivers of some humanity for her, and I see how you might have a growth arc planned for her character. I'll be staying tuned for what comes next. And nice twist with him using the selfie camera without her knowing. Clever.