by Luckie_Duckie
loving you for getting out new chapters quickly :D Can't wait to read what happens next!
I read this story all 24 chapters for the first time tonight. I cannot wait to read what happens next.
ok Im loving this story. I started reading it yesterday and have read all the chapters. Cant wait for the next chapter.. Wish the chapters were a little longer :) Great work!
The story is good but what happend to Tildy? I mean she is Ciens' sister and nobody has mentioned her since the rape scene.Other than that i really like this. Very good
Chap 18: Alex dragged her behind him, killed her, then allowed his men to rape her corpse.
yet again another one though yes I would agree they are a bit short almost like your teasing us to keep us waiting..but do please keep up the great work I love this story..
So short but wonderful all the same ^^ oooh I can't wait for the next chapter, oh I love it!!!
The short chapters seem to add to the suspense, waiting eagerly for the rest.
It is now the wee hours of the morning...I have been sitting here reading the each chapter with anticipation. I do hope you are planning to continue this story as I would love to hear about Cien's journey to the future and would love a happy ending for the couple...okay so I'm a hopeless roamintic....hey, a girl can hope can't she?? Keep up the great work.
Are you ever going to finish this? I like it. Short chapters, but good though. Please finish.
don't stop don't stop!!! i'm on the edge of my seat to see what is goin to happen!!!!!
Great story, great plot! I really wish that you would finish this story, but it looks like you may have abandoned it. Thanks for sharing it!
I just discovered this story and am completely involved now. Please continue to write it -- you've got a true talent.
Im on the edge of my seat, pleeease finish this amazing story?! You are a brilliant author! ^_^, 4rm tani.
I'm on the edge of my seat. Dying to see how it pans out.
Please do continue!!
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I feel like this story is a hidden gem on this site and by far one of my favorite stories on here... Its absolutely amazing! Its too good of a story to just leave us hanging... Please please please finish it?
I was happy it ended happily ever after with no kum by ya in the end. It didn't need all the erotic sex crap to be a fantastic story.
KID HER HO : meaning in Urdu "are you there" I hope so because I'd like very much to read more. ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Story was great. I was hooked. But it totally left me hanging. Please , pleeease finish it .One of the best stories I've read.
This story could go so many different ways... please give us an ending!! You've got amazing writing skills- The story is so deep- even though the chapters are short. I love it!
this story is amazing and I’m dying to know how it ends!! Although I’m not keen on the idea of them living in her time rather than his I’m really enjoying this story...Please work on this again, it has real promise
YIKES, ALEX I'M GONNA START HATE MAIL AGAINST YOU. DONT YOU KNOW THAT CALLING A MODERN WOMAN A BITCH WILL PROBABLY GET YOU KNEED IN THE GROIN???? TUT TUT!!!!
I'm confused about a couple of things. Firstly, when Fraser found out she was taken, he almost rode his horse lame trying to ride to McPhearson's castle (two days ride in a few hours) to save Regan, then the next chapter he's at home for a week planning her rescue?
Then later he calmly walks up to McPhearson's castle, and is let in, even though they know that they killed and raped his sister, and nobody mentions anything about her. It seems to be a bit of a continuity problem....