All Comments on 'Highland Magic Ch. 33'

Great story and I love it I do. I know you have to repeat bits (history repeating and all) but could you not have made this one longer to get more of the story in, therefore progressing. I know I'm greedy, but if you continue repeating bits it can get a tad grating and highly frustrating! You want people to READ your work not SKIM it which is basically what you can do after the first paragraph with this section. Anyway, I look forward to another installment, hopefully tomorrow!!!

Bronte Novice.

I loved this story. It is a simple tale of love, but the way you described it made the story seem great. I love your style of writing. Please continue to write such great stories.

Thank you