by IKnowKungFu
I really liked this story. It's very sweet, and a very charming fantasy to a guy who's a bit like Taylor. You're a very good story teller, especially because you tell the story you want to tell, not just the story you think people might expect. One thing, though, between Erika and Jade, I have my preference, and I think Taylor does too. But maybe he's a more open-minded fellow than I give him credit for. Anyway, thanks for writing this nice story.
Realistic, sweet, and hot. A rare combo to pull off, please continue this story!
Wish fulfilment fiction at its finest—and I mean that as a compliment and not at all a criticism. I do hope you plan to continue this!
Other than the "big tits" trope, I really enjoyed this. It's always nice when the underdog comes out on top and wins the prize. I especially liked the lunchroom scene when Jade and Erika both discover that they are crushing on the same guy. I think that when they decide to share Taylor between them equally was great. And then at the end, their latent bicurious side comes out putting the icing on the cake.
I would have given this a five except for you coming back to the big tits thing over and over again. Only mentioning it one single time at the beginning as you describe their physique would have kept me from taking away one point. 4/5
I enjoyed this. I am not into really big breast so that part didn't do it for me, but I did like the lunchroom scene i also likes the way you described what he was thinking outside the home before knocking. Liked how the girls kept going back and forth of who gonna be his first at everything, Also enjoyed how the girls started to look at their bi side at the end. I hope you will consider a second chapter where they all decide a three way style relationship and explore the girls sexuality as bi a little more.
Pappasleaze!
Was hoping the virgin tag applied to the girls as well but alas just 2 high school sluts in a rare window between boyfriends/fuck buddies that decide to give the adorable nerd a try because he was nice to them. Nothing special here, moving along.
Wow, a dumb mouth breather who can't read and thinks anyone who had sex before is a "slut". How about you shut the eff up and stop giving the rest of us men bad name eh?