by neutrona
This is by far your best story. The setting is unique and exciting. The story, filled with dramas of two vastly different types, is very well crafted. The passion is so very real. The description of their movements is graphic yet not crude. The language so powerful, I felt myself being swept along as I watched the characters' action in my mind, and I too begged, "Don't Stop!" Excellent story.. extremely well written.
Very Hot! There is more that one fire burning now.