All Comments on 'Highwaymen Ch. 01'

Well done!

Indeed! She (a mere slave) would have us warned that her Master's writing contains elements of over romantic fiction?

Sounds like she needs putting in her place.

Good beginning, by the way.

An excellent tale where the woman actually has control for once! Very sexy indeed, I liked it a lot. However I'm not fond after the second chapter, the male in the story gets far to uppity for my liking. He should be conditioned as all men need to be in reality.

You should have kept the woman as the dominant partner in the relationship. Suits her vivacious attitude better.

Nice work.

It takes a while to separate the gold from the gravel on Lit. I have just started reading -- measured in paragraphs -- and I am yours! In my search I was impressed by the high ratings (although sometimes I don't agree with other folks). Your third paragraph hooked me, totally.

I'm pleased this story is still available for us "newbies."