by patricia51
Well done. After reading a while, kind of figured something wasn't on the up and up. Still a nice story.
Obvious from the title, I just skipped to the end to confirm. Boring and of zero interest.
Keep it up
You have a way with humor and the unexpected twist. Good work. Thanks. 5 stars.
Another little surprise in a good story. You have a great sense of humor.
Been there, done that and enjoyed the hell out of it! Well written, fun story - keep at it.
Keeping the marriage spicy and exciting. A real loving married couple. Excellent.
Usually, when I think about sexual roleplaying I feel like it would be silly and embarrassing and I'm not very interested in it at all. This story made it seem like a whole lot of fun, though!
Your stories are fantastically written, with great character depth, and an delightfully astonishing amount of heart. I started reading this tale with a bit of a heavy, wary heart, but, not five or so paragraphs in, I started grinning like a loon. You've made a staid "old-fashioned" monogamy "fetishist" very very happy this day. I cannot overstate the delight I took in this tale, and others of yours I've read. Keep writing, please!! ;)
Great Tale. I think I read it a while ago. You and that vivid imagination!
5.0.
Rob Conner
Predictable ending - but very well written. Congratulations and thanks.
and re done . there is that what will we do next time, or this to that...
It's true. The plot is nothing new. But you would not be Pattricia51 without giving it a fresh new "paint job". Resulting in a nice entertaining story. And of course it's always nice to hear something from Bridget every now and then. So while it's not your best I was happy to read it. Regards, Umberto
Hi patricia
many thanks for a good story
trouble with most of the readers of this website is that they dont know the difference between Erotica and porn
Very hot and lots of fun to read. This one definitely was worth the time. :)
Hat and rather funny.
Nice to see these two characters again.
Good work as always, patricia.