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Click here"Yes, yes, yes! Fuck me! Slam that cock into my tight little pussy!" He does as I tell him to.
Suddenly, he picks me up and impales me on his cock. I twitch. "Fuck, fuck, fuck!" I wrap one arm around his neck and one in his hair. I gently tug on his hair and he slams me into a wall. I wrap my legs around him as he fucks me against the wall. "Shit! Daddy, I'm gonna cum!" I pinch my eyes shut and arch my back. He takes a nipple in his mouth and sucks hard. "Fuck me daddy. Fill me up with your cum. I want to feel it splash inside of me."
He grunts and picks up the pace. Suddenly, I cum. It's so intense that I scream. He swallows my screams of ecstasy in a kiss. I feel him shoot 6, 7, 8 thick hard squirts of cum in my pussy.
He sits me down on the edge of his desk and withdraws his cock. I whimper in protest. He smiles at me and bends down. He begins to suck our cum out of my throbbing pussy. I feel myself getting closer, but he stands up. I open my mouth. He spits our cum in my mouth and I swallow. I kiss him deeply and he sucks my tongue.
"We still have an hour and a half until my next class starts. Do you want to fuck my pussy again daddy?" I giggle.
To Be Continued...
I guess this was OK for guys who just want something to jerk off to, but as a piece of literature it was badly written.
Apart from the name change, the writer seems to have no grasp of past and present tense.
The dialogue is trite and unrealistic, and the action totally implausible.
Before submitting a work, read it and ask yourself, if it was written by someone else would you find it believable.
Too many wannabe authors write with their cocks or pussies, instead of with their minds, with the result that the finished article is no more than a series of improbable sex scenes. Wanking material rather than an entertaining story.
You need some help with your technical issue, but please continue to write. I've found both of your stories interesting and appealing to baser instincts in a way I can appreciate. A "4" and worth checking back from time to time to find something new.
I look forward to your next contribution to the world of 'LIT'.
BTW, nice picture, with eyes that draw one in.
EMRR
I thought it was weird that the daughter's name was at first Elizabeth but then a few paragraphs later her name was Hannah....? Odd mistake to make in my opinion and a bit distracting.
I would have preferred he wasn't also her professor, but it was a very nice scene.