All Comments on 'His Birthday Gift - Cuckold'

Good start - more to come, I hope.

The pace is way too rushed... too fast and too impatient for my taste. Barely had I started to feel wetness between my thighs and a glimpse of a climax in the horizon and BAM you end the story. Go much slower on the sequel, please.

Veronica

"The pace is way too rushed... too fast and too impatient for my taste." -

Thanks for your feedback! One day I may accomplish the perfect "pace" for all readers! :)

"Good start - more to come, I hope."

Thank you, and hopefully yes. That is if I can slow down the pace somewhat! :)

Incidentally Anonymous Veronica, I'd love to read some of your work. Would you indulge me please. Thank you ;)