All Comments on 'His Dark Knight Ch. 01'

I enjoyed reading it so please hurry up and update!

A really great start! Interesting and well written. I hope you stick with it and finish the story. I will be watching for it. 5 stars!

Well written, can't wait to read on.... :)

Captivating! Some minor flaws missed, could use a little editing, but nothing major. Well written out with no rushing the plot along just to get satisfaction. Bit of a disconnect to him actually calling the male Daddy as we have had no establishment of his desires yet, but easily worked into the next part of the story. Looking forward to more!

Loved it. Please write the next one soon would love to see more of your writing.

Amazing can not wait for more. Please update soon!

Amazing start, can't wait for the new chapter.

Trash, absolutely Trash