All Comments on 'His First Time Almost Wasn't Pt. 02'

REALLY Sorry, the first section of this is duplicated from Part One. I bodged the copy/paste from my original one-piece story. Was hoping I could edit it out but not sure how. Hope it doesn't spoil the read. Way out of practice - been 2 years since I last submitted. Thanks for your patience.

I enjoyed the story,would have liked a bit more of the earlier thoughts when he was getting lifts by Brenda.Also would like to maybe have a third part where because she thought she was going to be left on the shelf, Brenda may want to continue a relationship and let it work where they have kids and a long marriage. You could submit it in the romance section but maybe copy it into a continuation in the first time as well. Keep up the good work.