All Comments on 'His Good Girl Pt. 02'

by ABitNaughty

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
control

Let kate take control! Or at least let her try.... ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good!

Eric should slowly tease her with some toys next and gently make her cum since he is starting to have feeling for her and it might make Kate trust him more :) x

Please continue x

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimabout 10 years ago
Where next ?

The county jail :-)

He can then have his arse repeatedly raped.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

The sex was great until you fucked it up by turning him into a sappy retard. If you want to right ridiculous rape romances go get a job at Harlequin

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Amazing!

Very awesome story! Please continue anyway you wish , but I do want more resistance on her part ! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I totally love your story!!!!

This is so HOT. And I am totally fangirling on Eric. I want Kate to somehow screw up (like try to run away from him or whatever) and Eric will PUNISH her oh so painfully and pleasurably.

Please keep the nonconsensual tone all the way, though I would love for them to have a happy ending. Will definitely wait for your next installment!!! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
moooooore

love please give us more of it. i loooove it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Amazing...!

This is an amazing series. You are doing a great job, please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good Start!

The 1st two chapters are amazing. I'm looking forward to reading more. Eric needs to be more aggressive and commanding. Spanking is good, as punishment & pleasure. Bringing in toys, i.e. nipple clamps, a flogger, an anal plug, vibrators and dildos. He needs to take command & control of all Kate's holes. Right now I wish I was Kate and can't wait to be completely dominated!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Asshole

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