All Comments on 'His Monster Girls Ch. 03'

I feel abandoned.

[23.08.22]

Brill series!

11/10!!!!!

Good story. Should make an interesting series. Suggestions:

1. Turn on a Grammer checker or get an editor. Cloth is different than Clothes. He is different then Her.

You have an inventive mind, but Spell Check can hurt what you are saying, but breaking up the story.

2. None the less, I'd be happy to find one of your imaginative creations in MY life.

Brilliant start so far can't wait to read more

10 yrs have elapsed since 3rd Episode.You've failed to keep your promise.

Hope that you are still healthy, and above ground. 10 yrs is a while to wait...

Jope you're still around, been eagerly awaiting chapter 4 for a decade!

Too bad you never followed up on your promise, as I very much enjoyed these stories...

Wonder what happened to chapter 4. Oh well, it was good while it lasted.

This had the makings of an epic series. Like the others, I wonder what happened to keyan66....

Where is Chapter 4?!? Please please please !!!

It's a real shame this story didn't continue.

I can forgive you for referring to Russians as Norse, but I won’t forgive your abandoning a fun series. I think writers run out of ideas when they think the story is centered around the sex. In a good story, sex doesn’t drive the narrative… it is merely window dressing. Without a solid story, all you have is predictable stroke material. It gets boring.

@rbloch66 The Rus were a Viking tribe who founded the Kievan Rus' Empire, after which Russia is named. And that makes sense.