All Comments on 'His Personal Assistant'

erotic and very sensual. It made me feel very good. I could see it happening in my mind.

Just tarnished a wee bit by a couple of sillinesses.

200 year old Scotch? Only in whisky museums. It would be dangerous to drink.

And a Monet fell off the wall when the door slammed? Nope. Anyone who owned a Monet would make bloody sure that could never happen.

Enjoyed very much. Like the way you took your time with the story.

Thank you for a beautiful story that was full of passion and not some base attempt at writing a stroke story. I hope to see many more of your submissions. This was definitely worth the Five Stars I gave it!

Run away Alyssa, he raped you once and he has more darkness inside. It just won't go away.

Graham hopefully is no longer a prick. He seemed so nasty. The change in him was almost to sudden. Yet love can do wonderful things. Alysa is a sweet girl, hopefully she won't get burned. I enjoyed your story, highly erotic, and pleasurable. I like your style.

Thank you!

But, he is not the sharpest tool in the box, huh?

Ok story but i feel like there a middle missing... not really a lot of Back story but good beginning and hea ending.

Ok story but i feel like there a middle missing... not really a lot of Back story but good beginning and hea ending.

Sweet romantic story!

i am from Germany and have to admit that english is the best language to write and read such great love stories. i read a lot of stuff here and this love Scene was one of the very best Scenes i ever saw here. the escalation , his and her doubts and the outcome...simply amazing and worth much more then the 5 stars i give to this Story.

all you have to do to win the heart of a shallow man is be prettier than the last girl. i've seen this type of boy many times. i used to envy them till i saw their lives fall apart everytime because they were at heart always shallow...

A couple of love " you"" after a good shag does romance not make!

Came here for romance and got a nonconsent, where she repeatedly says no and fears since it is her first time both of which is obviously doesnt care. He clearly used her as a vessel to be gentle and confuse her to use her to fulfill his months long desire, and worse she is a non-participant, which makes it more like masturbation session for the guy.

The abrupt ending however was a little savior.

Nice buildup, great ending.

200 year old scotch

I liked it. Five stars.