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All Comments on 'His Private Show'

by Ephywrites

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Messy Windows

So much for the tinted glass! LOL. Fun, sexy, enjoy your language use. Write more please.

laintxlaintxabout 6 years ago
Wonderful images

Thought this very provocative and imaginative. I'm looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice Story, small mistake

First you wrote:

"She stretched, kicked off her shoes"

and shortly after:

"still wearing her red pumps"

But besides that I really enjoyed reading your Story

EphywritesEphywritesabout 6 years agoAuthor
Continuity!

Omigosh, I did blow the continuity. Oops! I'll edit that ASAP. Thank you so much for pointing it out!

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