All Comments on 'His Shirt'

My goodness child, pick a tense and stay there. Turn on your grammar check and use it. You are so good at descriptions it gives me chills, but the every time you change tenses I'm starteled and confused.

bravo!! you sum up an experience with grace and spice. a treat to read! ~mina

I am just as flattered here as I was when I read this before you posted.

Thanks again for sharing this ... Scott

Yay! You posted it. Such an erotic and sensual read ranger. I can't wait to read more from you!

Ranger, you write with real feeling, and your story is full of wonderful imagery. I love the perfect balance of romance and eroticism...please write more!

A wonderful read a great combination of imagery, sensuality, and intimacy..can't wait to read more..:) ~pebbs~

A wonderful read a great combination of imagery, sensuality, and intimacy..can't wait to read more..:) ~pebbs~

This is as good as anything on literotica! Why isn't this on the Top List? Great detail, great pace. Abstract enough in the right places, but explicit and detailed in ALL the right places. Thank you!