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by Ongria098

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Really really really need an editor

Ongria098Ongria098almost 9 years agoAuthor
To Anon

Yes I really need one. Not denying it though. Hope someone could help me. Thanks for reading it! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I like how this is going. Subtle world building was nice. The story has promise and I'm looking forward to reading it after you an editor. Plenty here to help.

Ongria098Ongria098almost 9 years agoAuthor
To Anon I like...

Thanks for uplifting my spirit! I now have an editor but no updates yet. But as soon as it is done, I'll post it. Thank you so much! :)

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