All Comments on 'His Special Day'

by Dejah_thoris_of_Mars

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Bad mistress. It didn't need to be Dwayne. I HATE dom/me stories when they f-up people's real life. As if a Dwayne wouldn't mess with him outside of her controlled world.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
"Bad Mistress"

i agree with previous anonymous, at least with what i know from the story as it is.

Dejah_thoris_of_MarsDejah_thoris_of_Marsabout 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

I did consider that but I thought that it added to the humiliation factor. However, I'm happy to change it, since it obviously interferes with the enjoyment of the story. I appreciate all feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
What the end needed?

Was him choking the Mistress out and leaving.

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