All Comments on 'Hit and Fun'

That was a great story, I love it.

A great story, and covers a very common problem for married folk of both sexes.

You're really close to an awesome story here.. fair character development, good scenario and relatable characters.

Your dialogue on the other hand brings things to a screeching halt and derails my reading of the story. Learn how to use quotation marks, or learn how to have them actually make it from your computer to literotica's database..