by nerk
We need to read more of this story. It is a great start. There must be many more adventures to come. The first husband coming to rescue her, the wedding, her adjustment to their life together, their first child, etc.
tihs is great. well written and an unconventional historical setting which made it feel fresh.
A short vignette, short on story, but with a lot of implications! But your choice of subject matter was quite unique. Even though this wasn't in one of the genres that I usually read, I hope you write more of your tales!