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All Comments on 'Hold Me'

by AnneArbor

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great Story!

Loved your story - well written and very hot! Thank you!

tellstory2jaketellstory2jakeover 10 years ago
Excellent

Exciting story. Your story builds nicely as it progresses, and ends in an erotic crescendo. Exquisite vocabulary that paints vivd mental images. Excellent composition and very well written. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Rubbish

Total crap

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice vignette

Now put together a longer story, you've got the writing talent for it.

hoo_hoo_boohoo_hoo_booover 10 years ago

Lovely language- thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Excellent writing! Very hot!

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