All Comments on 'Holiday for 2'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
wonderful romance story but-

This is a very loving and tender love story, but it is much too short in all aspects. The ending is too brief, the introduction is too brief, there is too little character development, and the love scenes are also too brief. The story is good, but it could be much better if revised.

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