All Comments on 'Holiday Humiliation'

This is cruel and why kids have issues now a days

Should have included some kind of sex maybe blackmail instead of Facebook. Very lame

And why would she consider them friends?

This was the start of a great story. One that goes beyond the "prank" they thought they were doing; but one that could haunt them for a very long time to come.

She could be blackmailed, or she could lose her career if she was going to be a teacher, police officer, public servant or elected official. Or she could be stalked and kidnapped, raped or even killed and her "friends" would be left to deal with the consequences...or even their children as a revenge driven parent ruins their lives.

I think you have a great first story and a great part 1. I like how the girls were the ones to start and push the humiliation. I agree that if the photos weren't posted she could have been the girls to play with and humiliate. Additional parts could include what happened the next day and the next holiday. Again nice story and start.

What was everyone else doing? There wasn't enough details to justify only her being humiliated. Frankly, it was ugly as well as unbelievable.

cool premise but lacks build-up. "They were playing spin the bottle and the dares were getting a bit crazy." you should start from the start and say how the dares got crazy and how it built up to "crazy dares" and her "friends" should not have uploaded them but used it for longer to humiliate her more before uploading the stuff online anyways. In short there was no build up, you cut too straight in to it and ended it too abruptly. I am not saying that this story should have several chapters but it could benefit from more details, I would love to see a complete re-write

But I liked your story. It had an innocence to it, and girls are often meaner to other girls than men are. Why they were so mean to Lara was unclear, and why she went along was even less clear. However, it's easy to surmise. She was probably young, foolish, wanting to be liked, and naive in the extreme. I guess she needs a new set of friends. I fully expected some sort of sexual exploitation to occur, perhaps via extortion from the shutterbugs, but they blew that with their eagerness to post the pix online. Lara will be scarred for a long time, but that's not unusual in the nonconsent rubric now, is it?

That wasnt hot. That made me angry. She didnt deserve that level if humiliation, id beat the living shit out of them all if i knew them irl.

Not cool.

That's way beyond anything funny or consentual.

Too short to make it interesting.

I love it! I actually had someone do this to me years ago. she was my online friend I met through Yahoo chat and we added eachother on Facebook. I begged her for weeks to take the full frontal nudes I had sent her on Yahoo and post them on my Facebook. Finally she did it for me and I still wank over the memory to this day

This was pretty terrible. Friends don't do this kind of thing. This group of creeps deserves some retribution.