All Comments on 'Holiday of Surprises - Day 01'

This will be a livelier read if you re-write in present tense. No 'had <verb>' this or that. Relive it in your mind and tell it as if it's all happening now. Good luck!

Damn, I love huge breasts on fifty something year old women.

Far too much time spent describing each little insignificant thing. Made me lose interest. My time is too valuable.