All Comments on 'Holiday Surprise'

by pedro1000

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Pedro, you need an English editor.

Women is plural of woman.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Not Exactly Great English!

If you'd bothered going to the trouble of editing/proofreading this, it could have been a reasonably enjoyable read. (Rule # 1: Don't annoy the reader!)

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Not

Not a.lot here. I'm fact, nothing worth reading atball.

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