All Comments on 'Holiday With Mum Ch. 04'

EXCELLENT JOB!

You wrote this in '03, where is part 5 ??

man how come there is no part 5 yet this is one of the best ones on the website. real imaginative. cant wait to read the next 1.

Knock her up, start her lactating, get the aunt preggers... just keep this hot story going!

what a story had me hard all through it you have to keep it going get him to fuck both of them and get the girls to join keep mum and son to-gether when they get back home

Too bad that the author never finished it. The last posting was in 03, so I guess we'll never get to read the rest of this super story

Such a shame.

i agree with the other comments great story you realy need to finish it

Again, as with Danny and Jenny, a fun & fantastic story. I loved everything about it and can imagine (many) additional chapters such as a deserving end to a marriage which has gone south, intense and extremely delightful times with mother, aunt, Paige, and who knows who else! Any way, once again, ... Absolutely Great. LeKar

hope you finish this story soon its pretty good so far

Great if you finish it. Absolutely one of the worst I've read if you don't. You have a wonderful story to be going on with, but you've left the reader in a lurch. If I'd known it would have an ending like this I would not even have begun it. I hate unfinished stories, reading books and discovering pages missing, that sort of thing. I don't like 'to be continued' tv episodes. You need to get to work!

To bad you didn't finish this story. It was hot

Fantastically hot, so disappointed that there are no more chapters.

I loved the beginning but then you got others involved would rather this to be just the two of them. Spoilt.

you need to continue this series and make each chapter at least 2 pages.

i thought they were going have a hell of a party with the aunt and mom

Seeing that it's been almost 15 years since the last chapter was posted, I don't t think we'll ever find out what happened with his mum and aunt.

Yeah, this is an old story but it’s the first time I’ve read it. And it’s a damn shame, the way it ended. It’s like a car flying down the road at 60mph, then BAM! A brick wall. A dead stop. That’s It, the end. No mas. Too bad

bummer this never got a pt.5 was a great series we love it

Aww come on...theres no more...dammit.