All Comments on 'Holiday with Step Sister Pt. 01'

Way to leave us hanging. Look forward to chapter two

way too short, please keep the chapters coming and have them be at the 2-3 lit pages length.

To dam short left me hanging

Check back as i have more to come. :-)

Great story , just needs more chapters. Waiting for next chapter. Thanks

too short dammit

Really enjoyed the story but it was too short. Looking forward to the next

Chapter. 4-5 stars

My sincere apologies to you my dear readers... I used the literotica draft panel for this one, and somehow the story got caught out with just one page.

At the moment I am polishing out the second part and it will be online soon.

At least, this chapter didnt end in half od word. :-)

Looking forward to next chapter.

Can't wait to read the next installment.

5/5 for the tease

The subject and overall story is great but, not trying to be rude or nit-pick, some things didnt really flow. For instance, you said "there were five couples total." Then the very next sentence says the other eight swoon showed up. Much like the other comments, would be been nice tok have two pages here for the first chapter. Keep up the work, I'm looking forward to the rest of the story

It is a great start. Can't wait for the next Chapter. I wonder how many that have negative comments have actually posted a story here. Can't wait to see what happens next.

can you smell it through the computer?

also, good story. i came

I meant to write WE were ten in total instead of THERE.... Thanks for that! Will fix that in the next edit! Much appreciated....

Is the next instalment coming soon please? I like the way you are filling out the characters in the story.

I’ve sometimes had similar fantasties about my stepbrother too. Great build up!

I can’t presume to know what that term implies in the U.K. but the U.S., it implies cousins are far enough removed (for most states, that would be 3rd or 4th cousin) to legally be considered safe, genetically.

You shouldn't presume to know what that term implies in the US, either, unless you check first. It's in Merriam-Webster's online dictionary, and it doesn't mean what you think it does.

They are not related except through their parents marriage, so any sort of relationship wouldn't actually be incestuous.

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There was some odd and not well throughout dialogue, though. One example would be that the step mum "was 40 years old but very mature" I should hope so! It sounds like you're describing a 20 year old person.

Not incest!

To those who say step siblings are not related thus no incest. First did you forget the couple that admitted to being kissing cousins. Second the category is incest/taboo. And having sex with a step sibling is definitely taboo. My only complaint would be it's too short lol

Great start to a hot storyline. Well done. 5-stars

They flew to Spain and then a coach journey "The trip will take around four hours"?

Where the h*ll did they land? France?

There are many airports in Spain that are far less driving time from the Costa del Sol than that!

And, fellow 'Anonymous', why is "having sex with a step sibling is definitely taboo"?