All Comments on 'Holidays With Aunt Helen'

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wolfarmywolfarmyabout 20 years ago
Very Nice and hot!

Skillfully written, loved the seduction techniques.

ficton_masterficton_masterover 19 years ago
Excellent

I like the way you eased into the sex, developing the characters and making them real, and still fully told me about the sex.

Are you going to write a follow-up telling us about the sweet union as she makes love to her aunt? I'd like to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
mmmmmmmm....very nice...

keep the story goinggggg

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