All Comments on 'Holy Orders Ch. 03'

its a pity u didnt proof read your typing or maybe u just dont know how to spell. for example where u used there u should have used their

Which is it?, MORE TO COME I hope. Please carry on with this story it is one of the best ever on this site.

Despite your warning at the beginning, I was curious enough to begin reading the story, but found it too much beyond belief to continue to the end.

Not a story I would recommend to my best friends.

Your imagination stretches the limits of anybody else's imagination - unless one is a dirty, old man (or woman)!

With your talent for writing, I would suggest that keep on a more conventional path, Mikro.