by curiouskatty
smirk
smərk/
verb
verb: smirk; 3rd person present: smirks; past tense: smirked; past participle: smirked; gerund or present participle: smirking
1.
smile in an irritatingly smug, conceited, or silly way.
"he smirked in triumph"
synonyms: smile smugly, simper, snicker, snigger; leer
"I hate the way they just sit there smirking"
noun
noun: smirk; plural noun: smirks
1.
a smug, conceited, or silly smile.
"Gloria pursed her mouth in a self-satisfied smirk
Comes in all shapes and sizes for us all. It's good to see that the Church is available for all that needs them in their time of need. Looking forward to more on them.
I would really like to see characters physical traits be revealed through the eyes of other characters. It keeps a sense of humility.
this could a really good story i love it already cant wait for more so would you please update soon thanks
I have the feeling this is going to be a very good story. Please do not let over zealous commenters chase you away from finishing this story.
Really great beginning
So far, so good. If you can keep the interest you have so far generated, you will have a successful debut. I appreciate your efforts and most of all I appreciate you sharing them with us (me).
I want to be kissed on my jaw that way, I can tell this is going to be a good read.
Too short, and no indication whether there is a Ch.02 to follow. And clearly, hardly the ending of the story. So.....mixed bag.
And a very fine first post. I'll be looking out for more.
Original and promising start, can't wait to see where you go from here and how Peyton and nate will interact. Will defnitely be waiting for your next update.
and only Katty knows where it's going, or maybe not.
Romance, LW, or it might stay Inter-racial.
In any event, it would need a couple more characters to develop plot. More info on his (deceased?) wife and/or child, some of her background, up-bringing-wise, (evil foster-folk?) and they'll all need to tie in at their wedding, which won't be until after the birth of the child she is carrying ( evil foster-father's child).
or differently, or not at all, (which would be a pity)
Cheers, and for this far, Thanks.
Kilroy.
love the first story you wrote. and now want to read more. the writing was good the story also. so when are you going to post your next one can you tell me home sound a good name
interesting start. perfect grammar. can't wait to see where this goes. and damn this guy is tall! my neck kind hurts just thinking about how tall he is.
I can't wait to see what happens next. I' am curious about what happen to Nate's son and Peyton's back story. Can't wait for chapter 2 continue to good work!