All Comments on 'Home Again'

As brilliant as your stories always are, thank you.

Excellent yarn; I can see why you chose present tense/first person to lead us through the twists and surprises! The way the narrator speaks of her husband also suits very much for her character and backstory, and the Lawful Good in the story is heart-warming. :)

Very enjoyable. Always good to see more from you! ^.^

The tense was surprising, not many stories use it, but great narrative.

it has a very good story line.

hope to get more good stories from you.

:)

A, another terrifyingly terrific addition to this genre of Fantasy stories.

Excellent piece, I enjoyed the change in writing style to present tense and the "as it happens" image that came with it.

For a good story to read. This one just made my day. ;)..

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I loved the story. I have been waiting for you to start writing again and it was worth the wait. Keep up the awesome work

I never comment on stories here so consider this a first. Amazing. Too often on this site I just find (rather hot) smut without much real substance. So allow me to say that this was incredibly well-written, even if it relied on an often used trope. Hot AND has an excellent story. Well done.

So well written, and the sex was amazing, and the characters, and the climax, and your way of storytelling, everything was brilliant.

Well done :)

Please never stop writing, you are very good at it!

Not bad!