All Comments on 'Home Alone with Beth'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Very nice!

I hope you write more about these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More more more

please write more

its so hot :D

jpb531jpb531about 11 years ago
The ending was kind of random

With Beth asking a question then saying what she said. Enjoyed it otherwise, wouldn't mind reading more about these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story!

I loved this story! I just wish she would have been rougher;~)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Weird Ending...

...But a great story, would also love to read more about these two!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
nice

great story wish it were me lookin forward to next chaptervery hot mmm

Cocklover31Cocklover31about 11 years ago
Conclusion?

Did you just run out of ideas for an ending? Or were you just desperate to finish the story? The story was great but the ending made no sense

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
leann5red very good

one hot chapter looking forward to next one it,s hot sexy and well writine pls more yours leann mawh xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot

Enjoyed !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good story but confused with weak ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I truly enjoyed it..I was caught wearing a Lil bit of lingerie n I good lady friend was standing at the end of my bed n rubbing between her legs .. well it's one hot intense sexual awakening..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I was hard n throbbing the whole time I was reading it

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanalmost 2 years ago

far fetched but a very hot story

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