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MarilynmwfMarilynmwfabout 20 years ago
At Last

A guy who can write a story without ass play

Thank You

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
More of a Penthouse letter than a story...

...but well done. Pretty normal sex between pretty normal people. Refreshing, even.

The third paragraph is unbearably and needlessly complicated, not to mention totally irrelevant. Easily fixed.

Write more.

Eric

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