All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 004'

Great story hope to read more soon

Another home run, thank you very much for sharing this with us here on Literotica.

Five stars for you. :)

I'm loving this series, totally out of the norm but so well written and believable.

Beautiful story, hope to see more love the theme

I've googled "Mandragora" and it says it's latin for Mandrake so it is not a vine?

Second when I try to imaging what she'll be like it between 1. the plant from litle shop of horrors (due to the meat referance) 2. or poision ivy (for the sexy plant appeal).

Please continue! 😁😁😁

they googled "Mandragora" and it says it's latin for Mandrake so it is not a vine the obvious question would be and your point is? sometimes a name is just a name ah well look forward to the next chapters regards andy

better order some pizzas and wine and feed that mandragora

Enjoying this story as it unfolds. best feed that vine though.

I love the way this story is unfolding. Please continue !!

My garden is full of stone female forms some clothed others not. Now pray tell me how am I going to walk through it and not either touch them and or talk to them and waiting to see if they move. A fantastic mind you have and please keep writing and publishing your stories. a five plus. Iceman

We just cleared some overgrown areas and found a female cast figure, wings and all. I had assumed angel. Maybe not so angelic after all? And that creeper vine will have to be watched closely as it attempts re-growth.

Annabelle, It has taken me a bit of time to get past the goblin baby-talk, which I initially found very distracting. But overall I have found your story to be most inventive in the situations your hero finds himself in. I look forward to a confrontation between the banshee and the real estate agent.

Lue

Plwease continue! Hard to wait for the next instalment!

What a fun frolic. Please keep it going. So many different monsters, and so many different ways this can go. Its definitely intriguing. Cant wait for the next episode.

Can't wait to see what monster "comes" next.

You did it again, a fun suprise. And he finally made peace with the banshee, plus you made a very good job at describing the feeling he got from that preservation woman. I could almost feel it myself, i really hope mike finds out more before they make a move..

Ok, i get the plant in the greenhouse..but where did the cliff come from?

I've read quite a few stories here. But this one captivated me a lot for whatever reason. Please keep writing. It's a lot of fun and you are wonderful writer as well :)

I'm really enjoying this story, the only criticism I have is that the sexy bits could be a little longer. Thanks for another great chapter. :)

Since I was a kid and saw the cartoon show called gargoyles. I have always had a thing for female gargoyles because the cartoon ones were so hot. So I give this chapter five stars and two thumbs way way up.

It's been a while since I have read such a beautiful story, that too in non human section. Well written and just keep coming back for more. Keep up the good work and creative juices flowing.

I am really enjoying this series, actually I must admit I look each day to see if there is a new chapter. You are really doing well building a great story line and some leaving intriguing hints and clues but leaving much to our imaginations. The sexual scenes are great but so also are the other interactions and discussions. A great read and I look forward to each chapter more and more.

Wow this is awesome!! Very well written and I agree with a previous comment, the sexy time could be lengthened, keep up the good work, also? What’s with the porcelain doll from the first chapter?! I’m dying to know it’s significance!!

very interesting and just right balance... moar please :)

This series is well written as well as hot. The descriptions are really great and my imagination is following you perfectly. This story has huge amounts of expandability and I wait for your next release with bated breath - lots of thanks from a grateful reader

Keep it coming. You're doing a bang up job with the story and characters. Awaiting your next tale.

Thanks for sharing! 5* Slainté

What a fascinating story!!!

Your writing is so vivid and detailed I fell in love with your stories after reading the first one and was happy to see there was a 3rd and fourth chapter but I need more!

Keep up the good work can't wait to see what other creatures Mike will run into!!

About the doll it could have been what is known as a living doll. I just read about them in the monster girl encyclopedia volume 2. But if it is of any importance I'm sure he will bring it up. So all we ca do is wait and see what happens.

Loving every bit of this and can’t wait for the next chapter! Fun and refreshing! Very enjoyable and well edited also! PLEASE keep them coming!

5* as usual!!!!!!!!

You are hitting it out of the park with this series, just so you know.

Please keep them coming and keep them nice and long.

SR

I have this bookmarked so I can quickly see new stories.;).

I haven't been dissappointed yet :)

Robert

Love this series!! Each installment gets better and better. Keep it up!

Just awesome Story that all I have to say

This is NOT a good time to stop this series - it's too much fun! Please continue!

I love both the content of your stories and your writing style.

You keep writing them and I'll keep reading them!

Awesome story so car, looking forward to more. Keep it up!

Looking forward to the next episode!

Absolutely loving the series!

Really interesting plot with a good mixture of erotica. I really enjoy it!

If this was a book, it would be one you start reading and not put down until it's done. Then you would go poking form the sequel. LOVE IT!

I'm loving the series and can't wait for more!

Love the use of all my ‘childhood monsters’. Now I’m looking at them quite differently though... please keep up the series.

This story is lots of fun so far, I'm really looking forward to future installments so please keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what's next!

I like the old monsters come to life. Keep up the story line can't wait for the up coming chapters a good read. Thx

This is a great story, and one I very much want to read more of! No pressure, but please write day and night so that the rest of us can enjoy it :)

/Henry

I like the little snippets that we get. I hope that your muse continues to visit you regularly. Keep up the good work

I like this story. Kinda curious if you plan on putting in an actually lizard character. Like a lamia or dragon. Or even just a lizard woman.

I can't put this down with each new release...please continue!!!

This story seems to be a version of this game. If it is, awsome, if not, coincidence.

Keep up the good work.

I find this series,quite enjoyable. A walk into perhaps a parallel dimension..something just so enjoyable...

Thank you

Butch

Hey, he just needs to take the two society chicks out to visit the greenhouse! Hehehe. Just have gargoyle girl grab them when they show up and toss them in the greenhouse, then after dark have her fly down and scoop up their car and drop it in the dump or river away from the house ;)

He better stock up on aloevera or something, dude is going to have a sore, swollen dick trying to keep up with all these girls, rofl!

Great writing and story hope to read a lot more

The writer imagination is soaring through this story. Fun, fun, fun.

and there are consequences.

Perhaps the ladies from the preservation society should be offered a tour of the green house. It is feeding time isn't it?

Love all of these characters so far and unfortunately I think I'm figuring out another... Maybe right or wrong, but either way I think this is a great series to read! You are an extremely inventive author!

Loving the series.

My gf and I really enjoy reading this together while we play. We both really enjoy the way you set the scene, describe the characters and, weave the tale. She was getting turned on just imagining the house as you described it in the first chapter lol

Perhaps an Auction or a Garden Party🌼🌸🌺🌛🌺🍄?

Perhaps the ladies from the preservation society should Be invited 🖤🖤🖤

Perhaps sign directing guest to Back Yard.... just an idea ❤️❤️❤️

244 Jake

Love your writing, and imaginative characters, but why no nipples on the gargoyle breasts? I thought that they laid eggs, but nursed their young. A breast without a sensitive nipple seems... cruel.

Keep up the great work.

I would love to see this as a book series!

Thank you so much for sharing your exquisite sense of adventure.

I am very impressed with your novels after several chapters and I must say that you are leagues above many of the stories I have read here so far. Keep up the good work and thank you!

Different and sensual!

This is more than a sex story, the best I have read anywhere!

This is a really good and unique story with original ideas! It’s also written very well with a good plot! Keep writing!

This is an excellent story, you've brought a new perspective to the monster girl genre. So far it's a very refreshing story, keep going pkease.

Your story gets better with each Chapter. I am absolutely hooked.

I found it hilarious as the woman complained that she felt offended that the main character trashed her offer for buying the house without even bothering to read it. I think I'd have been telling her why the hell would I care that she felt offended that I wasn't interested in selling MY property to her. Because it's not even on the list of things she has any right to be offended over, the only one with a right to be offended is HIM for her trying to pressure him into selling what belongs to him to her.

Reminds me of the many antagonists in a Chinese Light Novel, they just love to pressure people into giving up their property and get ridiculously offended when someone refuses to give them what they're lusting after.

Amazing characters, thanks!

Loved it.

I like how the gargoyle's sexual anatomy was different yet compatible.

Yeah you've done a great job making the Society really creepy and sinister without really doing anything creepy and/or sinister. That's really impressive!

Let's see. The author promises to continue to write as long as the readers enjoy what she's writing. What she is writing is amazingly funny, artful and a whole lot of fun. Sounds good to me. And, appropriate for how weird the story is, it is very self-fulfilling.

THANKS

This story is way outside my usual genre here, but it's incredible. Honestly I think I'm mostly reading it for the story. Great work!

This is such a fun read. No chance I am going to bed on time.

Congratulations on making me read erotica for the plot. Seriously, you did a great job with this one.

I really like this more and more as it goes on.

Use to watch the Gargoyle cartoon. Another character hit. They are not monsters but his family.

I'm in awe of your imagination! Thank you!

I just started reading your story today, and I have to say I'm loving it. And ur imagination, wow! Thank you :-)

FABULOS Interplay between characters. I don't have the words to say.

Excellent you have a natural Tallent for the obscure great chapter but you are keeping me from some chores

Another great story!

You have a wonderful imagination and communicate your storyline so effectively. This is my first venture into the non-human category. I’ve loved scifi all my life and this is not too great a diversion. Well done! Finn

Abella is something else and a likes mike more than he thinks

so far i am really impressed with this marvellous work. Wow would i ever like a wee goblin like Tink, mmmm. lol.

I look forward to then next chapter and the several after, or should i say....book?

Great fantasy ...

gETS MORE INTERESTING IN EACH CHAPTER. wISH i COULD FIND A HOUSE LIKE THIS. gREAT WORK

This second read through is going so swiftly.

Proof of an amazing author.

Reading this and knowing what I know.

I feel like Abella and a certain someone should get their own spinoff. I want to be specific but not spoil it for new readers.

So if you get what I'm saying it's in regards to Mike's love

Gargirl with a triangular pussy? That's pretty imaginative!

If it has tits and a vagina f**k it.

"Curiouser and curiouser" as Alice would say. Nymphs, Goblins, Banshees and Gorgoyles, what's next? Enjoying this story immensely, learning things I didn't know about the characters' 'species' backgrounds. And the sex is well portrayed as well. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Oh...a Gargoyle girl...that's new.

I must say i would love to converse with you annabelle. Your literary work is original, amazing and truely inspiring. In the early days of the internet i was a semi professional erotica writter. Though my confidence and inspiration have greatly diminished since then, mostly due to biased critiquing. And though im not certain i wish to write erotica again, i must say that you inspire me to wish to write again...though it will likely be scifi fantasy novels. I would grwatly enjoy speaking with you and learning all i can about being a modern online writer. That being said my comment today is related to the beauty and complexity at which you describe and create your monsters. Viewing beyond the norm and creating bioligy that suits each. For exaple triangular vagina or ridged, double nipples or lack there of. Exemplary. Please dont ever stop writing. I view your writing as a sexy x-rated female piers anthony. Dont ever change.

Very entertaining.

“Just don’t squeeze it too hard” lol

This was quite a funny episode. With the bites from the goblin and the bruises from the gargoyle crushing him I’m a little worried about this guy’s life. ;)

Am enjoying the series immensely. Thanks for writing.

Thank you.

Your writing style is absolutely unique and I love that you focus on the story itself primarily and everything else is secondary. Makes this feel like a true read and not just common smut! I cannot wait to see what else Mike discovers and how he and the house end up dealing with those pesky Historical Society individuals!

I am enjoying your unusual humour and look forward to reading further chapters, you are still very short on the descriptions but I am getting used to that.

This story is just plain silly! I love it. The world is too messed up. We need more silly. With a little sex thrown in here and there this is great!! 😄😄❤👍

Are you familiar with the Xanth series?