All Comments on 'Home From Work'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Hmm

This story is well written, but the fact that it's written in 'YOU' tense is more than distracting - more so for a male reader I'm sure!! (giggles thinking of a male doing half of that hehehehee)

dsidedsidealmost 20 years ago
Well written

A nice little story.

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