All Comments on 'Home Gym'

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impo_61impo_61over 8 years ago
What a brother!!!

What a brother!!! 1*

amischiefmakeramischiefmakerover 8 years ago
Cute and entertaining

I really liked it! 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
maybe it's me

but this story i feel was written by an idiot.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 8 years ago
Moment to Moment

Within each scene, it is a hot story. The problem is the transition from scene to scene. Those are individually implausible. When one combines them into a single entity, the story becomes Very Highly Improbable!

Works just fine as a stroker, not in same league as many thoughtful, creative and detailed works on this site! Worth every penny I paid for it!

3*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very nice

but kinda stupid to screw your brothers wife. and make that double stupid to EVER screw a slut anytime. they are too dumb to not get caught...

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Respect

No respect for yourself or your brother. Tracey is a good digging whore.

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