All Comments on 'Home Maid Ch. 01'

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tishangeltishangelalmost 7 years ago

Can't wait to see where you take this story, more more PLEASE!!!!!

doug_noughtdoug_noughtalmost 7 years ago
Great story

But mom needs to kick dad out so it's only her and Benny

swfb70swfb70almost 7 years ago
lots of possibilities

including the reason the daughter moved out was because she did the dad

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Can we have a foursome?

Can't wait for the next installment. There's nothing hotter than a hot mom and sonny going at it in various places while Dad is out or even at home. Sounds like Mom would definitely be up for some anal sex. Possibly some DP action once a hot foursome happens. Plenty of potential here. Hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Refreshingly talented piece!!!

Really enjoyed it!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Don't stop!

It's a great story you have started here. Your writing can only get better, go with it for now and see if anymore pop into your head..

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
Good start...Glad to hear it has just begun

Looking forward to Chapter 2

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
Dad has not learned and still doesn't respect his beautiful wife

Her son will offer her love, respect, and the physical attraction she deserves and she craves.

Hope we have more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Smelt is a FISH for Gods sake, the word is SMELLED.....

SHIT

gobears85gobears85almost 7 years ago
Appreciate the effort

Thanks for the story. Enjoyed it. I would have liked more build from tennis outfit to blowjob but enjoyable nonetheless

ROCKY70ROCKY70almost 7 years ago
Great read !!!!!!!!

I HOPE, the rest of the chapters are as HOT as the end of this one. PLEASE keep up the great work, and lets drop dad.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 7 years ago
A bit of a rocky start, but got better, and promises a lot of Good stuff to come

I do hope you expand this one.

merf68merf68almost 7 years ago
To the anonymous spelling fascist

Before you condemn authors for what you mistakenly think is wrong, please check the facts. 'Smelt' is a perfectly correct word and here it was used in the appropriate context. I would advise you to get an international dictionary and not rely on bigotted American forms of English.

49greg49gregalmost 7 years ago
Loved it

And I hope to see a second chapter soon.

doug_noughtdoug_noughtalmost 7 years ago
Read this again today...

"An ambulance arriving at a neighbor's house saw me becoming an amateur journo, snapping away as a woman who looked to have hurt her arms was taken to hospital."

Lol, was that a reference to your other great work, "Home Care"? Nice little easter egg :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Pretty Good

Looking forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very Good

Look forward to chapter 2. Sounds like Daddy does have something on the side.....his daughter?

JSipesJSipesabout 5 years ago
Waiting for chapter two

Very good! I gave you five stars! Maybe in the next chapter Mom could confide in Daughter that she had sex with Benny and asks for advice on how to handle it, to which daughter admits to having sex with Daddy. Daughter moved out so she & Daddy could have sex without interruption. That leaves many directions to go with this story. Sister & Brother, Sister & Mom, and maybe a threesome with Sister & Mom & brother. You have a good story going, don’t stop now.

Davidj001Davidj001about 5 years ago
YES YES !!

Keep it going!!!

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 5 years ago
excellent!!

can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More please!

Was disappointed there wasn't a "Chapter 02"!

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
Kick Dad to the curb, and bring sis home.

That will breakup sis and dad.

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGaleabout 2 years ago

Would love to see more of this story.............():\

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Oh I LOVE mommies in thigh highs. Excellent story. I gave it 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

By far my favorite author on this site. I agree you should finish this story but enen if you dont i know your next one will be great. Cant wait.

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