by barry_nine
Had to sit in the fridge after reading this,carry on McDuff with this red hot tale.You put who you like in the tale ,its your story.
That dominant aunt needs putting in her place,I suggests he shags her pussy first then while she is in a state of sexual frenzy, gives her arse a good reaming as she is forced to suck her sister.A cracking tale.
This story started out as a loving, erotic tale. I liked it because it portray the relationship between mom and son in a believable way. The dialogue flowed naturally, and, most importantly, wasn't over the top with excessive vulgarity. The son's character show a good deal of respect towards his mother, even though they are sharing the most intimate of relationships.
I don't know why you are bringing the domination theme into this story. It is detracting from the quality of this story, and destroying the loving ambiance of what could have been one of the finest mother/son tales on literotica.
I give this chapter a zero.
Forget these bunch of loser reviews and write how you like.
Very well written. Nice details. You're covering a lot of sensual areas....mother/son, mother/sister in law, bisexuality and bdsm. I enjoy it all. Threesomes and anal play are wonderful too. I hope Dad will eventually join in.
He has to be stronger than his Aunt, and make her submissive to him. Even if he has to get rough with her, he must conquer her.
so seems like the air force really is good at only making lil girls who will fallow orders