All Comments on 'Home Run'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nice Story

Nicely done. Didn't overdue any cliches but played them enough to make a fun narrative. Write some more like this and I'll quit slamming your other stories. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nicely done

Well done, if not a little rushed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Story!

Great Storytelling!

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
1*

Too silly to finish

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
So he now finds out she has been cheating for years

He gets nothing, bill and tony get everything. I say take photos and send to their wives. Dump her ass cold and stiff in the river.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
So he finds out

His wife is a cheating slut and his friends aren't his friends. Time to move on. Divorce the slut, dump the friends after letting their wives and girlfriends know what happened. Maybe a move to another city is in order.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Been there, got shot down at that!

So, Sweetie is NOT frigid, after all! Why do size queens ever marry 'regular Rogers?' Oh well, not a lot of investment, yet!

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
AFTER THIS GAME

its time to be Movin' On.....or as in Mexico AMF....TK U MLJ LV NV

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Absolute Garbage

Waste of my time reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
how to say "got cucked"

"betrayedbylove"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
1*

At least this cuckold writer stopped writing. I wish all the rest of the scum that post shit like this in loving wives would quit too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
awesome

I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Home Run

Great story! Write more of the same theme. You are good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
⭐⭐⭐⭐+ (4.4/5)! As of 05/25/20 this story has got 244.457 views & 69 favorites, which is 0.28 faves per 1k views (not bad).

The story is xenome's sex fantasy which he shares with us. It is short & straight to the point. A pornographic vignette.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Boring to the nth degree. It's strength is in its' brevity.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Cuck shares whore with friends. This shit was old 16 years ago.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very erotic story with good progression. MC seems awfully on board with the play especially as he’s the little guy!

Chuckles1966Chuckles19667 months ago

"So, honey, I've got a question. How long have you been banging either of these two a&&holes, and cutting me off? Actually, let's make it two questions... should I throw your cheating ass out on the curb, naked, or should I explain all of this to your fundamentalist parents when I dump your ass there?"

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