All Comments on 'Home Sweet Home'

It was like a 10th grader wrote this. Did you ever study grammar in school? Do you remember any of it?

poor grammer and was extremly boreing. your story simply went through the motions it lack any kind of feeling as well as passion.no heat none.

I liked it a lot. I was an English major in college and could care less about imperfect grammar. Great description. Keep the stories coming.

not a bad story line