All Comments on 'Home Sweet Home Ch. 03'

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kplusmckplusmcalmost 12 years ago
great start

need to fill in some of the blanks, what happen between mother and uncle, what happened at the mall, will they get together at school.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great story

Hope to read more from you soon .

Mriceman1964Mriceman1964almost 12 years ago
Great

Just wish there was a little more info . Why is Derrick so distanced from his parents ? What happened between them ? Could It be possible after the comment that the uncle made to his mother that Derrick might not be his fathers biological son or could mom of had a thing for her brother and got caught also ? Just wondering , Hope to read more soon . Thanks .

kaidmankaidmanalmost 12 years ago
dynamite

I hope you continue it is a wonderful story and it would be sad to end it here

linnearlinnearover 5 years ago
Epic Story

Beautiful story and extremely well written.

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