All Comments on 'Home to Kelly'

Almost a five star story. The "dirty little slut" line at the end ruined it for me. Maybe it's just me, but I don't want to be anyone's slut. I find the word derogatory and the phrase "dirty little slut" a complete turn off.

I agree with the first comment the term dirty little slut should be reserved for sluttish behaviour. Horny little vixen would be more appropriate for this story.