All Comments on 'Home-Town Hero Ch. 02'

Road head and banging out the details. Great phrases I have to use them. Thanks for sharing.

Sorry, ONE PAGE CHAPTERS DON'T CUT IT.....

Take longer and write this shit out.....

You really need to rethink your policy of many "frustratingly short" chapters. It put me off sufficiently to give only one star while the plot and writing deserves to be towards the other end of the scale.

I think we can handle chapters just a little longer than this...............really?

Use what words you want, but, dang,,, give us a little more...like 2-3 pages anyway.....

I agree with the others. I tolerate cliff hangers but the perils of Pauline always left me feeling cheated. The writing is still great so please keep going. Ignore the trolls and tell your story.

yeah..flash in the pan. Over seven years, and nothing more.

Life happens.

Maybe someday.................

thank goodness it was so short I really didnt get fully invested 2

I gave it 1 star because it’s a multi part story that has no more parts. And it’s been 7+ years since the last one.

What a shame it never got finished !!