All Comments on 'Homecoming Ch. 03'

by Frinkles

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
WOW!!!!

Beautifully written, and sexy as hell. I am in awe of your talent. Please continue this story! Update soon!

sunniisunniiabout 17 years ago
YEAH!!!!

That's what I'm talking about!!! Very Sexy. Keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Vivid imagery

The fact that this is a historical piece makes it all the more riveting. The characters are well conceived and the setting is convincing and works well for the story. Very sexy as well. Kudos!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wonderful story

Historical, interesting, and so could see it happen, love the first installments, and the well written way you've given us a glimpse into the main characters heart. JV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
WoW

the story is so good its scary. . . your words were almost cinematic.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
Good

and intense as the story unfolds.

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